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Vague connection or association

The text says two things are connected without saying how. "He was associated with the leadership of ExampleCorp" hides whether he was the CEO, a board member, or a consultant. Name the relationship the source gives. If the source does not say, keep the vague wording rather than inventing a role.

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associated with, in association with, connected to, in connection with, linked to, tied to

Before and after.

Before

He is associated with the Rajhans Orchestra, which he founded and conducts. The concerts were organised in connection with the celebrations of Pakistan's 50th anniversary.

After

He founded and conducts the Rajhans Orchestra. The concerts were part of the celebrations of Pakistan's 50th anniversary.

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